Plates. Voices. Music. Everything vanished, as if the world had muted itself.
Evan knelt in front of them, his heart pounding hard enough to hurt.
“Melissa Brooks,” the girl with the stained collar whispered.
The name caught in Evan’s throat.
Melissa.
The woman he had been waiting for.
The woman described as strong, kind, a devoted mother.
The woman who hadn’t stood him up.
She had been on the floor of her living room.
“Where do you live?” Evan asked, already pulling out his phone.
“Three blocks,” the other girl pointed with a shaking arm. “Maple Street. The house with the white fence. Please… please hurry.”
“I’m coming with you.”
And he ran.
This wasn’t about dinner.
It was about a life.
The twins ran beside him, legs struggling to keep pace, tears streaming as Evan spoke quickly into his phone, giving directions, explaining what little he knew.
The white fence appeared at the end of the block.
The front door hung crooked.
The air felt wrong.
“You stay here,” Evan said firmly, stepping in front of them. “Do not come inside. I promise I’ll help her.”
And then he saw her.
Melissa lay near the couch, unmoving. Her hair was matted, her face swollen, barely recognizable. She wore a simple blue dress. One shoe lay far away, as if the night itself had knocked her out of place.
Evan dropped to his knees.
His hands moved before his thoughts could catch up. Checking her neck. Her breathing.
“Melissa,” he whispered. “Can you hear me?”
Nothing.
Then—there.
Weak. But present.
“She’s breathing,” Evan told the voice on the phone, urgency flooding his chest. “She’s unconscious. Please tell me help is close.”
Outside, the twins stood frozen, clinging to each other.
Evan raised his voice.
“She’s alive. Your mom is alive. Help is coming.”
One of the girls let out a sound that was relief and fear mixed together.
Sirens and Questions
The ambulance arrived fast, lights cutting through the night. Police followed. Paramedics filled the room with controlled movement, equipment, calm voices.
“She needs immediate care,” one said. “We’re taking her now.”
They moved quickly.
The twins tried to follow but were gently stopped.
“We need to ask you some questions,” an officer said softly.
“No,” one girl cried. “We’re going with our mom.”
Evan stepped forward without thinking.
“Please,” he said. “They just went through something terrible. Let them come with me to the hospital.”
The officer studied him.
“And you are?”
Evan hesitated.
What was he?
A stranger.
A missed date.
“I’m Evan Parker. I was supposed to meet their mom tonight. They came looking for me.”
Another officer nodded.
“Let them go. We’ll follow up later.”
The twins sat pressed against Evan in the patrol car, watching the ambulance disappear ahead of them.
“Is she going to wake up?” one whispered.
Evan wanted to promise everything.
Instead, he chose honesty.
“The doctors are doing everything they can. She’s still breathing. That matters.”
The Long Night
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