Then I met his eyes and whispered, You forgot one thing!

Internal Thoughts: Dive into the speaker’s mind—what are they feeling at this moment? Fear? Anger? Triumph? Maybe this is the moment they’ve been waiting for, or maybe they’re just realizing the full extent of the situation.

Revelation: After the whispered line, you can reveal more about the forgotten thing. This can be through dialogue, flashbacks, or a slow unraveling of details.

Consequences: What happens after the revelation? The conversation could go in many directions—perhaps the other character denies it, tries to explain it away, or is completely blindsided. The aftermath of this moment could change the course of their lives.

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